| 2007-09-27 18:46:04 |
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Awesome... kept me reading.... now late for work.. look forward to chapter 2 |
| 2007-09-27 21:12:26 |
Lucy's lucky break
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well written.good story,very intertaining,u should be more self=assured and just put part 2 out...screw what anyone says |
| 2007-09-27 23:14:16 |
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Interesting story kept me busy reading with haste you could have got Hecter involved with Lucy or Bridget could bring more lust in the story, What do you think guys |
| 2007-09-28 07:21:49 |
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chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter 2chapter chapter |
| 2007-09-28 08:28:30 |
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Best story i've read....can't wait for chapter 2!!!! |