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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-09-29 17:32:04 | Lucy's lucky break | Well Done! I wait with bated breath for the arrival of Chap 3 |
| 2007-09-29 19:14:55 | Lucy's lucky break | wow! great story |
| 2007-09-30 10:27:20 | Lucy's lucky break | A very good story. Quite detailed and romantic. The only thing I must comment on is the continuity. At the beginning, Dave was twenty. then Svetlana noted at one point in the story that he was nineteen. I know it's nit-picking, but to keep it real, you must be consistant. Good work, though. I will be looking forward to the next installment. 9/10!!! |
| 2007-09-30 11:43:55 | Lucy's lucky break | One more little note...it's BOINK not bonk. |
| 2007-09-30 14:58:33 | Lucy's lucky break | Simply superb work |