| 2007-09-28 09:29:08 |
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A little on the lengthy side, but nevertheless, a good job done there. capturing and intriguing plot. now this is what i call good writing. 8/10 |
| 2007-09-28 11:37:30 |
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Enjoy all of your stories, but this one really raises the bar. Great work. Can't wait for Chapter 2. 10/10 |
| 2007-09-28 12:51:12 |
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An example to all contributers. This is what this site should be aspiring to. Thank-you. |
| 2007-09-28 16:36:14 |
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The best on here! Keep going! |
| 2007-09-29 01:16:54 |
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Excellent..chapter 2 please. |