| 2007-10-12 06:19:03 |
sexy secretary & friend
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Seriously dude, u should try to paragraph the story. room for improvement. 7/10 |
| 2007-10-12 09:16:01 |
sexy secretary & friend
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It's seriously not readable. Needs some capitilization of i/I and at the beginning of sentences. I gave up after a few lines. |
| 2007-10-12 23:20:02 |
sexy secretary & friend
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did not even bother reading it, horrible |
| 2007-10-13 11:48:11 |
sexy secretary & friend
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I really liked it.I like to dress in womens clothes to and wish there was more stories about cross dressing and being treated like a woman thxs keep up the good work. |
| 2007-10-12 06:49:46 |
At Your Own Risk
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Too long and a bit crapey, |