| 2007-10-12 08:35:08 |
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Hey that bloody bitch fag below me, fuck u asshole. u are a fucking piece of dreg in a shithole and is oblivious to talent. this was superb and i can only conclude that the writer is a talented, experienced and seasoned one. loved the surprise twist at the end. for imbeciles that give blantant remarks, get this in ur faces, if u dint like it u should have gotten ur pathetic sorry asses in the beginnining and fuck off, why even bother to read this as it is obviously beyond ur intellectually capabilities. 10 |
| 2007-10-12 08:46:00 |
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Like totally. cant stand blatant remarks they just piss me off. fuckers. |
| 2007-10-13 03:44:10 |
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Great story, well written. Ignore the criticism. 9/10 |
| 2007-10-13 06:56:06 |
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it was the best i have read in a long time it made stay and read the hole story if it was abd i do not get past the first paragraph it is 10/10 |
| 2007-10-13 09:28:02 |
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Very well-written but I gave it only a 7/10 because it was far too long for the steady level of sexual excitement it generated, almost monotone. Though good, it lacked eroticism. This was just straight sex. I did become bored with this epic novel. Excellent writing anyway. 7/10. |