| 2007-10-25 18:04:29 |
At Your Own Risk
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6/10 |
| 2007-11-05 11:53:39 |
At Your Own Risk
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the parties are not as much of a turn on as brother and sister getting it on. more stories with brother and sister and mpm and dad would be great. |
| 2007-11-06 17:53:15 |
At Your Own Risk
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I read this story as it should be truely enjoyed. I read it in incriments. But if you feel you need to shoot through it, just cover your keyboard, because your genious had me firing off time and again. no other story has lived up like this one, and it will definatly satisfy everyone, in some matter. 10 for Excellent effort. |
| 2007-11-07 06:41:23 |
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way too long. GOD ThAT GOT BORING! didnt even care to read the last part even though it would have been the best... got too bored of ur crapy writing! go hug a tree ass hole! |
| 2007-11-08 19:51:17 |
At Your Own Risk
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to long and to fucking boring. dialog was boring, cheesy, and badly written |