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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-09 18:55:07 | At Your Own Risk | yep, i liked it |
| 2007-11-16 10:45:15 | At Your Own Risk | U FUCKERS ALL KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO FIND A WELL WRITTEN STORIE ON THIS SITE, THEN Y LEAVE NEGATIVE COMMENTS WHEN U FIND ONE? -HOPE U BURN IN HELL, STORY ROCKS 10/10 TILL I DIE! |
| 2007-11-22 23:43:16 | At Your Own Risk | that was awsome i love brother sister stuff and any long story is a good story in my book |
| 2007-10-13 11:14:28 | Inside Me: C03 | Alright i have been quite a fan of this series, but i have to say, it does not feel right without the sex. this might explain the low voting score at this point. generally well writen, but after all its a sex story so it would be good to integrate some sex into this part. 7/10 |
| 2007-10-13 15:11:45 | Inside Me: C03 | It's true, as first reviewer notes, that the sexual aspect is a bit understated in this chapter, but I'm not unhappy with it. the interpersonal relationships developing so nicely here are so interesting--and, I'm guessing those are also thematically important to your project--that you should not have to yield up a formulaic sexual interlude simply to keep your 'flip factor' low. this is not to nay-say the previous reviewer. the point made there is a good one: we're lookin' for stroke material here. toss us a boner, author. (I've been dying to use that very bad joke for a long time.) bulksfpmuks (read it backwards, to get my 'real' name) |