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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-17 23:22:25 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 1 | Good story line, poor writing. Silly detail - 9 inches? Of course you do... Not believeable but interesting . |
| 2007-10-18 01:33:41 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 1 | What da fuck, squirted 10 times? are u a cow? 9/10 |
| 2007-10-18 08:44:03 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 1 | sigh, shut the fuck you fucking retards, god damn, no one cares about you or your over the top negative comments, who cares if grammer is messed up, its a fucking sex story not a god damn novel, people who complain about grammer after reading this kind of story are either gay or virgins, bunch of fucking idiots. you do good work man, looking forward to the next chapter, at first i wasnt sure about the story, cuz of the long winded beginning but it was worth it to continue. dont listen to these stupid pricks, they are fucking retarted and need to die. keep at it dude. 10/10 |
| 2007-10-18 10:33:50 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 1 | if you want to write first learn proper grammar , then pre organize your thoughts instead of writing while you fantasize or jackoff this will allow the story to both flow easily and be more realistic, remember the average size of a male cock is 6 inches and every guy that writes this type of story always has a bigger than average size cock in their dreams .rarely a good story appears on this site . read some of them and get some ideas of writing styles . I rate it a minus - 10/10 |
| 2007-10-18 13:36:18 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 1 | dick's too big to be believable. |