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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-18 16:29:07 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 1 | I agree with the pundits who say that your grammar was bad. It was. The story was good but your writing needs work. 6/10 |
| 2007-10-18 16:30:15 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 1 | a great story, one of the best here, tell the assholes that don't like the grammer to fuck off |
| 2007-10-18 17:28:34 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 1 | good story but bad grammar. To those who said grammar doesnt matter, fuck you. Why? because when someone is reading a story, your mind can actually think better when it doesnt have to correct mistakes. The grammar wasnt horrible, but could use improvement. |
| 2007-10-18 17:52:37 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 1 | y'know i'm wondering when the fuck did grammar become so important in sex stories, its like yeah i saw the mistakes but who the fuck cares the story still was held together i agree with the guy below me, fuck all of ya'll who just judge by the fucking grammar, btw douche bags, a 9in dick is believeable ok, as long as he ain't saying its like fucking 11 inches long like sum of u dick wads say it is, this guy is doing ok, fuck the shit outta ur mom with the proud piece of meat man, fuck on fuck on 10/10 if i could 11/10 |
| 2007-10-18 19:50:21 | Bed Making Mom Chapter 1 | good story, but you kind of made a mistake at the start.... You said your dad left when your older sister was born, but he got your mum pregnant with you 5 months after your sister was born..... other than that and the grammar great story, i loved it |