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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-24 04:37:05 | Inside Me: C05 | Maybe he just wants to leave the best to the last. well, personally i felt that your narration was, once again, superb. the only factor you lack is the spicy sex, thus you should embellish the story with more sexual scenes in order to engage your readers. sometimes, drifting too far and deep into non-sexual events might be a turn-off for readers. however this rich and intriguing story plot deserved an 8/10, no less. |
| 2007-10-24 13:19:29 | Inside Me: C05 | A serious approach to incest, that includes the psychological brouhaha that goes with juniors and taboos, the clash of a nascent ego with a powerful superego, must go this way. The venue, however, imposes another demand: you are called on to induce boners or wetties that we can stroke off. ignore that call, and go ahead with the tale, e.l.hanes; you have my blessing anyway. and perhaps one day literotica will relax its constraints on materia, permitting its publication there, where it would be more welcomed by readers. bulksfpmuks |
| 2007-11-04 15:49:38 | Inside Me: C05 | do we eva get to find out how his gf died, becos its killin me nt knowin |
| 2008-01-21 00:17:27 | Inside Me: C05 | EL, you are absolutely amazing. Being a sex story, you've somehow managed to integrate the values of morailty based on trust and loyalty into it. These morals are thus clashing with the characters desires thus creating a very profound story. To all you other people: There is more to life than just sex. All a story is, is a message. The sex is just a plot device. This has given me a great idea. I'll have to have a talk with the administrator. |
| 2008-01-28 14:47:03 | Inside Me: C05 | I like the idea of you publishing your work, I mean, think about it. Its a great way to make money, and you'll hit a bigger area of people that will want to read your work and if I may say, not complain. I am mostly commenting on one of the comments here, and I do highly agree. |