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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-08 22:16:35 | Jayne the Genie (2) | Ignore the bad comments - while i agree part 1 was the best of the two, this part was also very good. Hopefully part 3 wont be too long? Any chance of anal with jay? |
| 2008-01-08 22:33:04 | Jayne the Genie (2) | Give him a break, he's just trying something different, but now he can learn from his past mistakes! 5/10 |
| 2008-01-09 00:31:44 | Jayne the Genie (2) | I've never commented on a story. Ever. But this story was so great I just had to. Keep on writing these.. you're going a great job. |
| 2008-01-09 03:51:09 | Jayne the Genie (2) | WIKID theme man, it was a 9/10, but your origion #1 got a 10!! the 1st one should have received a 12. Amazing work, keep going, but don't skip so much time from yr last story to the continuation. Thank you bud, good job, keep it up, and finally THANKS! :D |
| 2008-01-09 14:15:11 | Jayne the Genie (2) | Nice wish-fulfillment fantasy. The magic sex is great, but what about Jay? Do genies have needs? Do they get jealous? Why is she so satisfied to throw more women at Chris? As fun as this is, you could make it a lot better with a little more depth. =dreamer= |