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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-10 22:44:59 | Jayne the Genie (2) | The only way that you can continue the story without completely pummeling the storyline, is to have a rival faction come into play. Maybe an old friend of Jay's? Or a male genie that tries to take Jay? Something of that nature. Perhaps even have Chris obtain a bit of the genie power from interacting so with Jay? Plot, bro, not just a story with sex. Plot makes things interesting. |
| 2008-01-11 06:54:58 | Jayne the Genie (2) | good1 bro... keep going. with xtra effects. |
| 2008-01-11 09:54:08 | Jayne the Genie (2) | good but think of more imaginative things, like in the first part keep up the work |
| 2008-01-11 13:45:57 | Jayne the Genie (2) | Awesome plot so far, keep going! |
| 2008-01-11 14:38:00 | Jayne the Genie (2) | more romance less magic |