| 2004-09-01 09:59:04 |
Lovers
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The feeling are there and the basic idea and I agree with Jack Sprat. When I first started reading it I thought it was a poem. |
| 2004-12-22 19:20:55 |
Lovers
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Write a STORY using this poem. That would be better |
| 2004-06-16 03:43:13 |
The Invasion of Nicondria
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It could have been a bit better. Like seperating the paragrapsh. |
| 2004-06-17 17:30:03 |
The Invasion of Nicondria
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that was weird...........i didnt even cum and i flet as if my cock was growing....... |
| 2004-08-16 18:47:02 |
The Invasion of Nicondria
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That was great i got off 2wice. Cant wait for 2 |