| 2004-06-18 18:27:15 |
Aunt Beth
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i personally enjoyed it, keep focusing on your skill, improve your writing a bit and you'll have a lot of talent, soon. |
| 2004-06-18 18:39:30 |
Aunt Beth
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You know this is fiction when you jump up to help with the groceries |
| 2004-06-18 18:47:48 |
Aunt Beth
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hey hello how are you |
| 2004-06-18 18:54:33 |
Aunt Beth
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this damn thing sucked monkey ass. who really wants to get up and get the groceries. dumbass. this story made bad stories really fucking good. shut your cocksucking mouth and put more realism into the story fag. |
| 2004-06-18 20:09:23 |
Aunt Beth
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man dont listen to these idiots, just cause they're to lazy to get off there fat asses and do a good thing for their mother doesnt mean its gay, I mean look at your story, its in the top rated list |