| 2004-06-30 19:26:35 |
the first time i got laid
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wtf, i had a boner and now i lost it, mofo |
| 2004-07-03 21:33:57 |
the first time i got laid
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very sorry ass story. |
| 2004-07-06 00:37:12 |
the first time i got laid
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Dude...I'm usualy a nice guy when it comes to rating stories and stuff but this is shit n a stick. you would be doing the whole world a favor by not writing ever again and if you butcher the english language again i will shove my size 13 boot up yer little ass/ |
| 2004-07-14 21:15:19 |
the first time i got laid
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Yeah, I have to agree with almost everything said before. This story really sucks. Bad spelling, punctuation, it throws people off. Too short, and very unrealistic. What "hot" girl who is still a virgin, takes the pill? If I could rate this story a zero, I would. |
| 2004-07-19 03:25:48 |
the first time i got laid
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what the fuck is up wit this horse shit. this is easilky the biggest peice of crap that n e one has ever read |