| 2004-07-13 21:04:31 |
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this story rules, cant wait 2 finish it, find an erotic publisher and get it printed dude |
| 2004-07-13 22:27:22 |
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also - more chapters please |
| 2004-07-14 11:54:51 |
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holy shit man this was awesome but it took me like an hour and a half to read. I believe that hes the luckiest guy alive. DAAAAMN |
| 2004-07-14 12:11:16 |
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OMG! This is one of the best erotica stories I have read in a LONG time.Wouldn't change a thing, have you thought about getting published? I am in the process of getting my first book published now, and it is worth it. You my friend could make a killing, description is good, it makes your mind work to see the picture, and feel everything that is going on. WONDERFUL! Don't quit what you are doing...you are a great writer..and this is a Great story! Good luck!!! |
| 2004-07-14 13:53:56 |
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Dude, this is the worst story I have ever read. Its all about a bunch of horny girls. Choke and die on dick mutha fucka. |