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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-07-24 03:24:29 | The Camp Nurse_(1) | Alike many of your readers, I know what plot means to a story. Everything! You cant have a story without a plot. So thanks for the tutorial but you should concentrate on dictation and paraphrasing instead of stroking your ego with overstated facts and poor attempts at humility. Seriously, lose the intoleraby thick conceit and your story might be stomachable. |
| 2004-07-24 17:50:42 | The Camp Nurse_(1) | great story! |
| 2004-07-24 19:05:45 | The Camp Nurse_(1) | story is to long and needs more quotations and more paragraphs. Need some work on story also. |
| 2004-07-25 13:36:26 | The Camp Nurse_(1) | i wanna fuck some nice babe's ass .. mike |
| 2004-07-26 12:55:09 | The Camp Nurse_(1) | It was everything a story should be. Have him go back next summer. |