| 2005-08-06 22:14:49 |
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Wow that was good, plz write more. |
| 2005-08-07 03:02:51 |
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Ever hear of paragraphs? |
| 2005-08-07 20:00:19 |
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Needs proofreading... All the mistakes, lack of paragraphs, lack of quotation marks really detract from an otherwise good story. |
| 2005-08-07 23:14:38 |
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great story... liked it alot!!! but you need paragraphs... and quotation marks... like linny said |
| 2005-08-09 09:09:11 |
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Great job Andrea |