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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-08-21 09:24:40 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | That story sucked.Do you have any clue want grammer is? Or even better, learn what spelling is. THis story barely even had a plot. And there was no emotion except saying "stuff turned me on more." |
| 2004-09-03 00:27:32 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | ummmmmmmm well it was nice and i dont argue with straght on fucking but this is a stroy and you need a better plot sturctior |
| 2004-09-11 21:19:53 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | spelling, grammar, an actual plot. Its not even THAT long. Flesh it out (literally and figuratively) and you could pull an 8 |
| 2004-09-13 21:47:47 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | do us all a favor... next time you sit down to write... BUY A FUCKING DICTIONARY |
| 2004-09-19 12:06:52 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | god damn, that sucked. You can't write! is english your first language? if so, I would reccomend suicide. |