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Date | Story title | Comment |
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2004-08-02 03:32:55 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | Im glad u have many comments 4 my story. I appeciate many of the positive ones. this was my 1st story i will try harder 2 check grammar and spelling. Also i would like 2 address everyone who says that bestiality is nasty. IF U WOULD READ THE DAMN story desc. above u would know dont read this story becuase of bestiality. Now i would like 2 thank everyone for there comments. No Matter what my rating is i really would like to say that im going 2 write a conclusion that is more descriptive and less "GROSS" as some readers would like to say. Thank You |
2004-08-02 22:39:08 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | Learn english. then write. you seem to have mixed up the order you should do these two things in |
2004-08-03 09:56:31 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | Very poor attempt at erotic writing. Sorry, this was BAD! |
2004-08-04 00:09:35 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | sucks. 0. |
2004-08-05 05:52:44 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | Okay plotline, but that's bout all the good things I can say bout this story. More description!!!! I would like to read the conclusion, and don't give up you can only get better w/ practice. |