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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-05-30 14:51:37 | Starting young | did u try and see how many times u could change an adjective or over work one? jeez , cum, jizz, semen, bubbling, sticky gooey, cum. i give u a 2 for effort tho the grammer, im not even going to start on that. |
| 2005-05-30 15:23:38 | Starting young | oh yah another thing, did u mean to try and change the internet girls screen name or were u even paying attention? it changed from iloveskin4097 to ilikeskin4097 pay attention alot of money next time |
| 2005-05-31 22:35:04 | Starting young | Nice story, but it was a bit long. I gave you an 8. |
| 2005-06-03 15:04:04 | Starting young | yeah, these guyz who actually critiqued your story took all the words right out of my mouth...shit grammer, stupid mistakes, overused adjectives, etc. i probably wouldnt have said you overused them, i would have just said to use more adjectives i mean...you make them repetitive...which is bad...i liked the overall story though...6 |
| 2005-06-06 09:38:16 | Starting young | Democrats, what does that have to do with the story? I dont get why you would post that.. Good Story! |