| 2005-06-09 05:41:47 |
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hey wow that was the most amasing piece of crap ever i mean it put a whole new level of shittyness to the whole storywriting world it was just not even remotely plausable and the gramar was shit but really how many 12yo girls actually talk and act like that just way too farfetched. (and i know my grammar is probible shit too but im not writing a story) i give it a 2 |
| 2005-06-09 06:59:30 |
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tht was the most amazin story i read i am a guy bt still tht was mean it made me want to jam mi 14 incher in you and mi sis so i think tht u myt want 2 cm 2 new zealand 2 taste real man meat |
| 2005-06-18 20:40:32 |
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Great story! |
| 2005-06-20 12:09:32 |
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I know everyone else has already said this but your grammer is shit, made it hard to read. I gave up half way through. |
| 2005-06-25 15:32:41 |
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i liked it i'm 14 f and if i could i would do it. It is a bit far fetched but i like to read that kinda stuff. But i do agree you need to watch your grammer. So its easier to read and understand. However i don't think i could take a 12 inch cock inside me at least not when i was a virgin |