| 2005-07-08 15:49:06 |
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Ooh, Iliked that, not incest so much but the rest was pretty good. |
| 2005-07-20 05:45:07 |
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... I love when people comment on someone else's shitty grammar and don't spell the word right. Work on your repetion, and you'll be all good. |
| 2005-08-04 19:36:49 |
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Pretty Stupid story. Grammer sucked horribly, and your attention to detail sucked just as bad. Sizes may have been possible, but not very probable. It was sick, the grammer, and attention to detail was annoying. I would recommend learning how to write and then trying again. |
| 2005-08-05 16:55:18 |
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it was good until the rest of her family started acting like complete freaks and being...weird. bit before it was alright you could've followed it with that sort of feeling. almost impressed. |
| 2005-08-05 21:24:30 |
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mmm i fuckin loved this story i cummed 1000 fuckin times i fuck i wana be a whore tooo like that mmm best story eva |