| 2005-01-28 07:41:05 |
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awesome, great i love stories that have young (to me meaning under 18) couples "doing it" because that is erotic (people unless you like my opinion now I don't care if it like your'e a perve or whatevery belive what you want and shutup). 10/10 great. |
| 2005-01-30 12:47:33 |
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aww very good...i wanna hear more sweets |
| 2005-02-09 10:53:55 |
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your male lead was better than i . this is how we all wish our first time could have been . very good work keep it up. |
| 2005-02-16 12:50:58 |
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good story, but work on your he/hers u interchange them quite often, a few other grammar mistakes take waway from the over all quality of the story, however the story line is very enticing. |
| 2005-02-27 21:23:36 |
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How sweet!! That touched me, it actually did..I really hope mine is like that...I already know who it's gonna be with too..^_^ Wish me luck guys, although i'm still gonna be waiting for a while. |