2005-05-12 04:18:34 |
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Good story, well written; especially for a first try. The story is well thought out, and follows easily. You could try using your word processing pkg to find errors in spelling and grammer before submitting the next story and make it even better. Keep up the work--you have real potential |
2005-05-16 22:49:25 |
How it should be but isn't always
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AWESOME! 10 OUT OF FUCKING 10 |
2005-06-01 18:58:47 |
How it should be but isn't always
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good story write a part 2 |
2005-06-02 04:49:24 |
How it should be but isn't always
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I am not impressed. |
2005-06-03 16:31:33 |
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That was an awesome story! I'm give it a 10! |