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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-06-06 00:44:08 | How it should be but isn't always | Good job on a first story. It was really sweet and soft, which is nice for a change. None of this "fuck my nasty asshole daddy" garbage. (Although that can be nice, too) |
| 2005-06-07 20:42:53 | How it should be but isn't always | Well done, but work on all the word choice and the conventions on it. way to lead up to the climax . the main reason it was a winner is because of the romance, it wasnt to heavy or just distastefully light. overall good job, keep writing just use Microsoft Word |
| 2005-06-13 09:26:38 | How it should be but isn't always | Hey good story. The romance in it really helped. It was a little hard to read with some of the errors but other than that it was real good. Keep up the good work. |
| 2005-06-17 16:43:23 | How it should be but isn't always | great story, keep up the good work 10/10 |
| 2005-06-20 09:45:23 | How it should be but isn't always | Great story just a little misspelling. |