| 2005-08-28 22:55:26 |
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it was okay but you kept on saying he insted of her which made it a little strange but it was still good. just fix spelling and it will be great |
| 2005-09-25 16:38:54 |
How it should be but isn't always
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Dude, that was awsome. write more stories, fix your spelling mistakes, and make them longer. you got a future ahead of you you lucky bastard. |
| 2005-09-28 00:40:58 |
How it should be but isn't always
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you lucky bastard, is this real??? you should do this kind of work professionally |
| 2005-09-28 22:15:21 |
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that was a great story, a few mistakes but we all make them. good job |
| 2005-10-06 19:22:28 |
How it should be but isn't always
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fuckin best story ever |