| 2005-07-16 01:24:14 |
How it should be but isn't always
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It wasnt a great storty......but.....better than most......i'll give it a 7/10.......try and make a sequl....but longer..... |
| 2005-07-21 00:00:19 |
How it should be but isn't always
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That was the SHITTTTTT!!!!! Dude PLEASE keep writing... |
| 2005-07-31 04:11:25 |
How it should be but isn't always
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goos job man way to go |
| 2005-08-04 09:04:21 |
How it should be but isn't always
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that was the best story ever i hope to read more of them |
| 2005-08-06 07:29:48 |
How it should be but isn't always
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this was the shit please write another one but you need to make it longer and you also need to check your spelling it was alot of mistakes. |