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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-08-01 20:21:11 | Sweetest Surrender | Definitely needs some paragraphs. Also, the similes seems misplaced to me. Otherwise, good stuff! 7/10 |
| 2005-09-18 08:31:38 | Sweetest Surrender | mmmm...that was hot I never got to rape a 18r 19r old chick |
| 2005-10-31 19:58:10 | Sweetest Surrender | Wow very discriptive i enjoyed it a lot. I do hope you make another one. Contructive feed backs Little bit more tuning at the end would be nice. Also need some paragraphs that will make it better. |
| 2005-11-08 13:20:11 | Sweetest Surrender | for the horney people, it'd be easier to read if you had more paragraphs. well written tho |
| 2005-11-30 00:29:53 | Sweetest Surrender | i enjoyed it.. i wish i could get someone to play a rape scenerio with me.. :( |