| 2005-01-11 22:03:52 |
Prostitute II
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dude that sucked fucking cock it was ridiculous and stupid |
| 2005-01-12 10:25:29 |
Prostitute II
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You started with a pretty good story line but went down hill from there. Try adopting a particular style and be a little more discriptive. The story also feels like you're rushing to finish, and be careful with the grammar. 3/10 |
| 2005-01-12 18:07:20 |
Prostitute II
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dude some of these comments are so fucked up, i read one saying "i wish i hadda 4 foot dick" and i couldnt stop laffing! keep writing stories like this one, just so i can laff at the fucked up comments!!!!! 8/10 |
| 2005-01-12 20:40:01 |
Prostitute II
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i liikesx the story make more 10/10 |
| 2005-01-17 23:10:55 |
Prostitute II
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no offense but u have a bad layout |