| 2014-07-09 01:39:24 |
One Rainy Evening Part 6
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WELL DONE... I read it all in one session and am really looking forward to the rest of the story, congratulations on a job VERY WELL DONE. |
| 2014-12-10 01:24:02 |
A family friend becomes a family lover
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Ionly read this for about 10//15 minutes and gave up. did not seem to make much sense to me, I am giving it a a negative vote. |
| 2014-12-10 01:57:24 |
Asian Mom Jenny and her son Chris Series 2: Part 1
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Too little description spoils a story, AND TOO MUCH DESCRIPTION TURNS IT INTO A BORING STORY, guess what this is. apart from boring it is getting nonsensical. |
| 2014-12-22 06:47:30 |
THIRTY-ONE DAYS...PART 1 [chapters 1-6]
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only read p1 and 2,, got bored stiff, if I had paid for trash like this I would take it back for a double refund |
| 2014-07-03 23:52:10 |
Peeing In The Woods ..... Part 2
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For me this is not up to the standard of ONE RAINY EVENING, but after looking at the dates etc I realized that this was written well before O,R,E, your writing has obviously improved since this effort, not too many writers on this site can say that, congrats to you. |