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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-04-18 11:12:41 | Boys Locker Room Rewrite | i think it was absolutely crap shes 18 and ur tryng to make the girl sound like shes 12 its stupid and the way uyou wrote it was not good i like those sort of storys most of the time but yours wasnt any good in the first place and it hasnt gotton any better i wuouldve given 0/10 but it wasnt one of the choices |
| 2004-04-26 22:44:13 | Boys Locker Room Rewrite | ant understand whats going on too well. need punctuation. |
| 2004-05-02 23:26:04 | Boys Locker Room Rewrite | 1/10 but still good |
| 2004-05-16 17:37:38 | Boys Locker Room Rewrite | shity story the 1st one was better because the charecter is 18 not 12 |
| 2004-05-27 22:09:52 | Boys Locker Room Rewrite | use a dictionary to spell correctly; however, the story served itws purpose. |