| 2008-02-17 01:55:30 |
Boys Locker Room Rewrite
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if u dont like it dont read it damnit |
| 2004-02-13 09:42:29 |
dog sitting 1
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WOW would i love to be the daughter in your story |
| 2004-02-18 22:45:25 |
dog sitting 1
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whew, i wish that was me. i just broke up with my girlfriend, and im willing to fuck anything with a hole!!! |
| 2004-02-23 22:11:12 |
dog sitting 1
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Not detailed enough, it really could EXPAND more. But good writing! |
| 2004-02-25 12:23:01 |
dog sitting 1
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The author has little or no experience with the subject matter |