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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-07-16 04:07:15 | Boys Locker Room Rewrite | i liked a few of ur stories but rape and hiting....thats weird...stick with normal stories |
| 2005-10-07 02:31:53 | Boys Locker Room Rewrite | It's got some good points but it would be much better if you didn't have to read most of the sentences twice to work out who's talking. If you Use quotation marks and the story will flow much better so the reader can concentrate on what's actually happening in the story. |
| 2006-04-24 18:25:33 | Boys Locker Room Rewrite | I read both this and the origional, there is very little diffrence. What was the point of the rewrite? Instead of fourteen she is eighteen, Big deal, and less believable. I like the theme. I agree learn to write properly. use Paragraphs and quotation marks. |
| 2006-05-14 06:22:38 | Boys Locker Room Rewrite | Hmm, I dont like this sorry.. It wasnt a turn on at all.. also you shoudl have "rape" and "older man.younger girl" in the options.. def should have rape in it though.,. Mehh sorry i really didnt like it. It didnt really have much of a storyline, sorry |
| 2007-05-23 10:35:21 | Boys Locker Room Rewrite | the 1st one was better |