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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-05-06 13:39:22 | Twisted Sister Part One | Not a bad story idea, that said, it needs work esp. the changing tenses, and viewpoint. If the story happens to you leave it there, If you're an observer, stay with it. I love reading incest/sex. bb gg bg etc. Keep practicing. R |
| 2005-05-06 20:01:38 | Twisted Sister Part One | I am sorry about the tense changes and spelling. I have posted the next part and once they post it I think I fixed it. I found the grammar checker on my program I write in and kept the point of view to one person. Thanks for all the advice and be well. |
| 2005-05-16 02:49:40 | Twisted Sister Part One | 10/10 |
| 2006-04-21 20:30:39 | Twisted Sister Part One | As a female i loved this story. I thought you did a great job keep up the good work! 10/10 |
| 2005-05-05 08:56:24 | one lonely day | useless story atleast improve english |