| 2005-06-17 16:27:38 |
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it was good cept for the whole fact that she was 12 and you put a knife to her face. i mean sure i understand role play but who does that? okay well it was good and keep up the good work |
| 2005-06-18 01:22:03 |
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if you want her to be older, just think of an older chick ;) |
| 2005-06-18 04:12:36 |
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It was a pretty fucked up story. I think you should have mader her at least 17 or 18. I think it would have been alot better if you didn't have the main guy rape her at the end. The anal is good but the thought that it is rape kinda ruins it. |
| 2005-06-18 07:00:27 |
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FAN FUCKINGTASTIC!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2005-06-18 10:34:19 |
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wtf wot was up with the rape scene at the end? That was just stupid |