| 2005-06-18 13:08:10 |
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I've been searching forever for a story like this. |
| 2005-06-18 16:15:33 |
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i am deeply disturbed by her age. yet, i read the damn story, so perhaps it's ME that's deeply disturbed. anyway, i would change her age to 19. more realistic. i also recommend cutting the story into "chapters"--it's too long for one sitting. i concur with the others--no rape. good luck. |
| 2005-06-18 16:45:50 |
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Well, think about it. She liked getting spanked and liked it when he was rough with her. What's rougher than a rape? It makes sense that the guy took a liberty with her when he thought it would be okay. To me, the rape was well-placed. Excellent story, if not too lengthy. |
| 2005-06-18 18:12:33 |
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Best god damn story I've ever read on this site...awesome job man |
| 2005-06-18 19:06:18 |
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the story was amazing except for the age and the rape in the end ... i simply don't care that the girl liked it rough and rape was the roughest thing to do .. that is just wrong :(( |