| 2005-06-16 19:15:26 |
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Great story dude, but probably should have made Mandy older-between16&21 |
| 2005-06-16 23:23:53 |
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Fucking awsume !!!!! best if read yet !!!! |
| 2005-06-17 02:19:09 |
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One of the best FANTASIES I have read. The people that put you down must realise that it is a FANTASY!!! |
| 2005-06-17 04:47:11 |
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you fucking ass whole that was so nasty how could you write that and they are right STOP RATING YOUR OWN STORIES U SICK PERVERT |
| 2005-06-17 05:53:48 |
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a couple of complaints the story was gd just needed her to be older 15,16,17 maby 18 even. Also the rape at the end wot was the fukin point neway next story u write make it believible with a decent age and no rape its disgustin and wrong |