| 2005-07-05 20:13:15 |
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you suck donkey cocks you asshole, quit rating ur own story over and over 1/10 |
| 2005-07-06 00:10:51 |
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THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!!! BLEW 2 LOADS IN 30 MIN |
| 2005-07-06 09:25:03 |
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the ending was perverted, the whole rape thing sucked, very disgusting. but the begining was awesome and to the person who commented below about not reading the story if you dont like it, how do you decide if you dont like the story if you didnt read it in the first place? |
| 2005-07-06 11:17:48 |
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whoa. i don t remeber how many times i came. at least 4. the end wasn t so good. all that rape stuff. but the rest, hooooooooot |
| 2005-07-08 21:08:22 |
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I'm usaully a hardcore critizer, But this story was a 912 out of 10, The rape part sucked but the rest was awesome. Great job! |