| 2006-04-29 22:36:05 |
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reader below- dude its young if you dont like it well why you on it? dur retard and also to writer VERY VERY nice story best ive read |
| 2006-05-03 20:17:39 |
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hey dude this ROCKS!!! the length was astonding also. it took me about 2 hours to get through the whole thing. |
| 2006-05-04 20:00:39 |
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the end sucked o well |
| 2006-05-05 18:09:58 |
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I found this story quite arousing (at times) but i cannot get over it is a 12-year-old girl. the good thing about this story is that its fictional.
the words 'child porn' kept appearing in my mind-this is when i started to find this story quite disturbing. to be honest i hope this is not totally illegal! |
| 2006-05-05 18:21:30 |
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A good ending will be if the man and the child got CAUGHT! |