| 2005-06-27 19:28:35 |
My neighbor_(7)
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Fair for the first time, break it down into smaller paragraphs, and be a little more graphic as to what is going on. Keep writing. |
| 2005-06-28 15:31:26 |
My neighbor_(7)
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Great story but give more detail =P |
| 2005-07-18 15:43:56 |
My neighbor_(7)
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That was a good story.. seeing that I have never done that before. |
| 2005-09-12 08:11:37 |
My neighbor_(7)
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You could have specified a little more.......... but not bad |
| 2005-06-24 17:17:49 |
New Beginnings - Pt 2 Ch 11
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Dank i cant wait for the next part. keep up the excellent work!! ^_^ |