| 2005-06-28 07:40:29 |
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this story was a piece of shit you hear me A PIECE OF SHIT, how the fuck are you going to write a story about a family getting raped.You are a piece of shit |
| 2005-06-28 12:39:12 |
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i read it fine but lack oh " " around speech was slightly annoying. |
| 2005-06-29 15:20:25 |
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Yo Sexygirl7, you want to know how he rote a story like this??? well read it and youll find out you fucking dumbass!!!!!!!!! other than the retards that flipped out because they didnt like this story, it was prity good. i give it an 8/10 |
| 2005-07-02 00:32:43 |
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i thot it was pretty good, but the absence of quotation marks pissed me off and the spacing bugged the shit outta me |
| 2005-07-04 23:44:10 |
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Good story, bad grammar. |