| 2005-07-08 10:59:33 |
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that was one hell of a fuckin story! almost didn't bother reading it after seeing all the hatin' going on here, but now I'm glad i did. they are right about the punctuations and all, but the story itself was fucking hot!!! 9/10 |
| 2005-07-20 22:53:01 |
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The story was bad the grammer lost me a little but the sex was holding the writer reaches the evil in us all . It could happen for real . Worst does every day . Good to face it . |
| 2005-07-27 15:11:07 |
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really good story 10/10 |
| 2005-07-27 22:10:00 |
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good story but it reminds me alot of another story |
| 2005-07-28 04:52:17 |
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good story but i have definitly read it before and please drop the my wife bit its not neccesary |