| 2005-06-25 10:59:40 |
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May I be the third one to tell you to break up the paragraphs more. You really need that extra space between paragraphs...trying to read this it's like I'm lost in a sea of text. |
| 2005-06-25 14:26:28 |
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this stinks as bad as the writer does that keeps leaving comments under different aliases and also rating it over and over 1/10 |
| 2005-06-26 05:32:04 |
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That was really bad. Bad writing and bad content. |
| 2005-06-26 18:21:32 |
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the end was sry! THE END on ur fucking story 2 |
| 2005-06-27 18:33:44 |
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It was ok |