| 2005-06-24 01:59:55 |
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Well, as has already been said; the content is good, but the text does need to broken up more. May I recomend that you double space between paragraphs. Either that, or indent at the beginning of each one. |
| 2005-06-24 06:06:00 |
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YOU PPL ANNOY THE FUCKING SHIT OUTTA ME!!! WHY DO YOU HAVE TO GO RUIN A PERFECTLY GOOD RAPE STORY BY MAKING THE PPL LIKE IT IN THE END!? RAPE IS RAPE WHICH MEANS PAIN, ANGUISH AND VIOLENCE! THATS WHAT IT IS ALL ABOUT! FFS!!! |
| 2005-06-24 13:58:21 |
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A damn good story, im not into rape a whole lot but i though this story was fantabulous. |
| 2005-06-24 16:32:39 |
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Interesting how the women became the three easy pieces right away. That young boy has a world of fucking waiting for him. Mom, sis and probably his neighbor too. How about the girls at school? |
| 2005-06-24 22:48:53 |
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it was prity good |