| 2005-10-19 22:05:57 |
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You made this series so good but now your losing your touch. Change the girls back to just being with the 3 guys and not sluts. |
| 2005-10-20 10:57:13 |
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I agree with shaggy. You started out so good, but now your losing it. Get back to the way you wrote before, and you'll have more fans. |
| 2005-10-24 02:30:28 |
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Although the story has taken a shift from its original plot, it is still ok. I applaud your sticking with it and writing a series. Not may will do that. |
| 2005-11-23 09:08:23 |
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Keep writing but bring it back to the way it was origionally because it was so much better then. |
| 2005-12-25 03:23:55 |
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Nice continue if you will I will continue to read if you type. |