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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-26 04:15:43 | Pool Party_(3) | Grammar needs work but I love stories of young bitches taking it up the ass! |
| 2005-10-29 20:28:14 | Pool Party_(3) | They either didn't teach English grammar or spelling in the Valley back then or everybody was so stoned they didn't learn it. The partying must have been good though. I pity the dudes that married the girls of the Valley. |
| 2005-10-30 09:52:18 | Pool Party_(3) | I care not for this story. |
| 2005-10-30 17:25:34 | Pool Party_(3) | You need to learn to type, write, and express an idea in a cogent manner. I got lost, at the pool for a moment, i thought you were fucking her, and all of a sudden u switched to third person, and i didn't know where u were. then u switched back and i found my place. Do not let our criticisms, affect you negatively. u have enuf balls to exercise your mind, and maintain the discipline, to offer us poor critics, a credible attempt to write a complete story. Rudy |
| 2005-11-03 03:19:13 | Pool Party_(3) | tho the grammar wasn't that good, damn! it gave me an orgasm! i need to be fucked right now! 7/10-not too bad! |