| 2005-11-03 03:21:24 |
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u guys are being to harsh on this story...sure it was confusing and bad spelling (its particular btw) but the story was good on the whole. |
| 2005-11-03 14:19:56 |
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Dude no time to learn english or spelling when your busy getting stoned and fucking. For those of you that have a prob. with my grammer and spelling, lets here some of your true stories about your english lit class I bet that was a hot time if not grab your dick and read it again |
| 2005-11-22 16:52:39 |
Pool Party_(3)
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A good story but a little hard to follow. Better grammar would sure help. Forgetthe criticism and keep writing. |
| 2006-03-29 17:00:19 |
Pool Party_(3)
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this story is great but try and copyu and paste and use a word document and use spell checker ohter then that great 910 |
| 2006-05-29 18:49:31 |
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Who the fuck cares about the grammar or spelling it was a hot story wish i had been at that pool party |