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Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-02-16 01:31:35 | Quad's Ch. 8 | has any one other than me realized that chapters 2 through 8 where all posted on the same day within minutes of each other. And yet the author says he recieved emails between chapters. Either he is in a time loop or a paradox of some kind, or it is not possible for him to write 7 stories in less than an hour. unless of course he types a thousand words a second. Da dua da da dua dua SUPER-PERV. but i give the author a 10 for the entire series. He should combine the chapters into an erotic novel and make people pay to read his work. at least he could make $500 plus royalties on the book. i know i've written 3 adult books for beeline. just one writers opinion. |
2006-06-24 00:46:33 | Quad's Ch. 8 | who gives a flying orgy fuck as to how many partners? its all good! need more! |
2008-04-18 07:17:06 | Quad's Ch. 8 | i aggree with shaggy.. don't let them be like a slut,, bring some love and care into these girls and boys..like just shawn and Stephanie alone..and no onle else with them.. |
2005-10-25 23:57:02 | Pool Party_(3) | I grew up as a val and it was a good time for me too. thank you |
2005-10-26 01:24:03 | Pool Party_(3) | Some grammar issues, but not too bad. 8/10 |