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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-07-26 22:53:04 | The Portrait - Part 1 | ***Twstd&Dmntd4Lfe*** bck @ you peeps............. eric???... FUCK,is((eric))....."""and(... it,with,mounting excitemnt"""......think that,you meant(michael)................ portrait 2{{michael & his wife + hope}} or {{michael + hope & at least,one of,her girlfriends}}....... both plots,can even make,part 3 + part4,too...... perrrrrfec... |
| 2006-07-27 03:25:20 | The Portrait - Part 1 | id love to see a sequel for this, damned good writing aside from a small editing slip. |
| 2006-07-27 04:24:00 | The Portrait - Part 1 | God work, I was able to follow the feelings and fun these two had. very nice indeed. I would hope that with such a fine start you will follow with more. Have her bring her big sister along and let her teach him a thing or two. and then her younger sister, and let the wife walk in on it all. I'm sure you would handle all the mixed up who's doing who with skill and good taste. the knife |
| 2006-07-27 08:18:07 | The Portrait - Part 1 | good story man .. really like the whole background of paintin n stuff .9/10 .. keep wriring .. waiting for the sequel |
| 2006-07-27 13:44:25 | The Portrait - Part 1 | This story is good but I feel that it is too short. maybe I have been reading too much of jmiller's works. and the lmm. this story is good though. I liked the part when she wanted to offer her body to him. it was nice but she was too easy. |